In the Name of ALLAH the Most Gracious the Most Merciful
Last Saturday I had the opportunity to attend a writing workshop organized by Simply Islam. Titled “Social Media and How It Changes Things: Tips for Budding Journalists”, it was conducted by Saeed Saeed, a journalist with numerous publications and who is currently writing for The National. He is also currently working on his side project, MSpiration, “an online series of interviews with inspiring Muslims from all walks of life”.
The workshop aimed to cover these 3 things:
Before I begin sharing about the workshop, I thought I’d share on how I got interested in writing and the world of journalism.
My first forays into journalism was in 2007 when I had the opportunity to intern in Singapore Press Holdings, with the Malay newspaper Berita Harian. I was attached to the Business Desk, or Ekoniaga and it was the perfect opportunity to combine business, writing and Malay language. I studied Accounting & Finance but did not yet want to work in my direct diploma related job. I was still in the mood of exploring other options. The internship ended in 2 months, but I continued writing for BH on a freelance basis. One of my most memorable assignments was an overseas assignment in Negeri Sembilan, Malaysia. Students from a business competition had won a homestay trip to Kampung Pelegong, Negeri Sembilan and I was sent to cover their experiences as well as write about it. An important thing I learned during my time in BH from my mentor, Kak Haiza (or Ekoniaga reporter Norhaiza Hashim) was to write from an angle that would make the article most interesting.
Then in 2011 I had another journalism opportunity when I worked with IslamicEvents.sg. That year, IE was in charge of managing Ramadan.sg, the annual Ramadhan campaign by MUIS. My role was the Chief Editor of the website; writing and editing articles from a group of freelance writers. One of the highlights of that project was interviewing Sheikh Muszaphar Shukor, the first Malaysian astronaut, on his experience fasting in space during Ramadhan. MashaAllah, that was one inspiring interview! Through these experiences I discovered my love for writing and coming up with stories. To me, being a journalist brings about many opportunities to meet new people and new experiences and I just love the whole process of an idea becoming a story.
That’s enough of my story and now let’s move to the subject of this post, the workshop! I found the workshop to be interactive, engaging and interesting. I learned so many new things and I thought Saeed Saeed’s sharings on his journalism experiences were eye-opening and amusing. I am just going to share most in point form as how I jotted down in my notebook:
Validation of facts:
- Names (Tell me how you spell your name)
- Quotes (Do you go back to the person to rerun their quotes?)
- Positions (People change jobs and positions all the time – find out their current position and/or location
First Obtacle: YOU!
- Why are you writing this story?
- What’s your motivation?
- What’s your intention?
- What do you want to do with this story?
- What do you want from the story?
- It doesn’t work when you’re trying to please everyone
- But don’t be a slave to your ideas. Be open to changes. Are you open to the story changing?
Second obstacle: Reliability of sources
- Wikipedia is not a source – use it as background information, check the references instead
- What kind of sources are you finding?
- What sources are you going to cultivate?
- Without your sources there’s nothing you can do
- Just because you’re a creative writer does not make you free from research
How do you define your relationship with your contacts?
- Key word: Empathy and Respect
- Balance between being empathetic and professional relationship
- If you do your job the best that you can, people will respect you
- Even if you write something that people don’t like. Not everyone is going to like what you write
- Journalism is a “social professional” job
On Social Media
- Different social media platform for different uses. Eg. Tumblr for purely visual platform, Facebook for a chatty platform, WordPress for a writing platform, Twitter for reactions, trending, announcements…
- Importance of #hashtags
- Use your facebook to give a preview of your work
- Use them so nothing is wasted
- Look at the platform strength and go with it
The 5-min jump
After that session, we had to do an exercise called the 5-min jump. Saeed told us to “write about something you noticed today on the way to the workshop”. Just write and write, without any editing, as much as you can in 5 minutes.
Then, we were asked to read aloud what we wrote to the class! It was kinda embarrassing at first, to be honest. Then we were asked to listen to what everybody wrote and pick out certain words that call out to us. As the writer, we were asked to note down the feedback from others. We were then asked to condense our original passage into only two sentences, using the words that others have highlighted to us.
For example, this is what I wrote:
I noticed my friend’s brother on the way to the building, at the bus stop. I remembered Huda Lee (my friend) and that I had just visited her house with some friends last Saturday. It reminded me of her son who has bambam cheeks! It made me think of her strength and determination in life. Her strength inspires me. She is somebody who is not afraid to take risks.
The audience highlighted to me words that struck out to them; bambam cheeks, strength, determination.
This is my revision, condensed:
Huda Lee reminds me of strength and determination. She also has a son who has bambam cheeks!
Saeed said, doesn’t it now sound sharper? I would definitely have to agree! Although I was initially embarrassed to read out my paragraph, especially the non-existent word “bambam cheeks”, it turned out to be the highlight of my story. Another wonderful thing was listening to the way everyone wrote. All of us had our own distinct way of writing, MashaAllah. The words that we chose, and the rhythm in which we arranged our ideas. The exercise was also a way of us finding our own voice in writing. No doubt it would take a while to find it, you have to keep writing and editing… but it’s a start!
Some other points during the workshop that I found to be really useful on:
- When you write free articles, you can afford to make mistakes
- Once you write, you are a journalist
- Even if you write crappy stories, it’s your crap – be happy with it
- Your ideas cannot be photoshopped, that’s what you bring to the table
- Each idea will generate another idea
- Your first draft is gonna be crap, but you gotta own it
- Suspend all facts and grammar from the first draft
- Stick to a regimen. Write everyday
- We read a lot but we forget to “hear”
- Be someone on whom is nothing is lost – Henry James
- Write away and don’t look back
- Writing is a race between your creativity and your doubt
- If writing is your fitrah, go ahead with it!
My first drafts are definitely…crappy. Haha. But from now on I am so going to own it! Thank you Allah for this knowledge 🙂